The shining wall by Melissa Ferguson
Transit Lounge Publishing; 2019. 295p; pbk. ISBN: 9781925760187.
(Age: Senior secondary) The novel is set in a distant future, where
the elite lock themselves in a mega city and clone Neanderthals to
do their dirty work, while the disadvantaged struggle to survive
outside the walls. Impoverished 'Demi-Citizen' Alida is trying to
survive while providing for her ill sister, while Neanderthal clone
Shuqba questions her beliefs when faced with prejudice and
injustice.
And that's all that happens for hundreds of pages. The pacing leaves
something to be desired, with much of the novel's early chapters
just setting up character relationships and how terribly grim the
world is. The sisters spend longer together than apart, where their
separation is supposed to be the driving conflict once events
finally start moving.
The use of slang was also distracting - words like 'sleep', 'see'
and 'money' just don't exist in this world, which could easily
confuse a non-native speaker.
In general, The shining wall does a poor job of engaging the
reader, and does not seem to have much to say besides the stale
message about classism its entire genre shades.
Due to the high mature audience themes including drug abuse and
prostitution evident throughout, this book is not recommended for
readers younger than upper high school (Years 10-12).
Vincent Hermann