The secret maker of the world - stories by Abbas El-Zein
UQP, 2014. ISBN 9780702250071.
(Age: Yr 11-Yr 12, Adult) Recommended. I resisted this collection of
adult short stories at first and then I read several stories in
rapid succession. I found the stories elegant but did not feel
engaged. The stories while diverse featured a similar theme a man
who unknowingly awaits his fate and whose self absorption has stood
in his way of perceiving the truths around him. I found the stories
to be packed with beautiful lines but at times wished the writer had
'killed his darlings' more often.
However the memory of the stories linger and play with my mind and
two in particular have subsequently gripped my imagination. Red
carpet is the story of a corrupt politician, as he waits in
his office for his aide, mulling over his rise and rise, and
preparing for the speech that will define his success. He is unaware
that in the ten minute walk to deliver his speech his life will
unravel. The killer blow lays in the last line.
Birds eye tells the story of the wise scholar who is
oblivious to the undercurrents around him and who procrastinates and
makes increasingly foolish choices as the medieval city Merv is
about to be conquered and sacked. In a preface it is explained that
this story is based on historical events and figures.
There is a vivid imagination and the stories leap across time,
cultures and continents. I feel it will enhance any collections of
short stories gathered for Years 11 and 12.
Michael Jongen