On the come up by Angie Thomas
Walker Books, 2019. ISBN 9781406372168
(Age: 14+) Highly recommended. 'I might have to kill someone
tonight'. This is the startling first line of Thomas's novel, but
the 'killing' isn't what it sounds like. Bri is a high school
student who is finding it hard to sit through school when all she
wants to do is write and perform rap poetry, and she has her sights
set on wiping out her competitors in the rap contest held in the
local Boxing Ring. Her father was the famous rapper Lawless,
murdered outside their home when she was only a four years old. Bri
is all set to continue in his path.
The setting is a black ghetto in the U.S., where gangs roam and the
police target black kids. Bri's mother is a recovered drug addict
who wants her daughter to break free, go to college and make a
better future. But Bri has her heart set on being a rap star, and
maybe her drug-dealing Aunt Pooh or her father's ex-manager,
Supreme, will help her get there.
The novel is written in Bri's voice, and whilst the slang may at
first be unfamiliar and off-putting to a non-American reader, the
reader is gradually drawn into Bri's world and the language becomes
very real and natural. The author, Angie Thomas, is herself a former
teen rapper, and the world she describes sounds authentic, written
from her experience.
Bri's natural talent and determination seem to be leading her to
success, but hand in hand with that comes controversy and danger.
The perils of social media have also to be navigated. Bri finds
herself having to make decisions without anyone to really guide her.
Although the world of gangsters, drugs and rap contests might be
foreign, Bri's struggles to find the right path through it all, and
find her true values, makes a story most teenagers could readily
identify with.
I found it to be an engrossing story and I came away with a new
appreciation of the complexity of improvised rap poetry. This book,
set in the U.S., would make an interesting comparison with Limelight
by Solli Raphael (2018), which describes an Australian teenage slam
poet, and his messages of social equality and self-empowerment.
Helen Eddy